Poem: My Beloved

My Beloved, By: Abel Dawnlan

The only one for me,
The one who kept me truly free,
Who's absence now imprisons me,
My Beloved.

At the ball, we're more than friends,
I wished that it wold never end,
When we kissed beneath the moonlight,
My Beloved.

My life, it bids me go,
I'm sure it hurt you so,
We say our farewells, together no longer,
My Beloved.

The pain is plenty,
Without you life is empty,
The end seems so appealing,
My Beloved.

So now I return,
The fires still burn,
But now we are foes,
My Beloved.

We meet on the fields,
And neither will yield,
A friendship renounced,
My Beloved.

Words turn to steel,
And yet I still feel,
For our lost love,
My Beloved.

The blades, they now clash,
Against shields they smash,
I regret what I've done,
My Beloved.

I drop my blade,
And never wane,
Your blade, it cleaves flesh,
My Beloved.

I lie in the dirt,
Ignoring the hurt,
My last act, a kiss for you,
My Beloved.

The only one for me,
The one who kept me truly free,
Who's return has finally ended me,
My Beloved.

Um...
Shouldn't this go in the Originals section?

Abel-san! I think that poem is really good actually, cause somehow, I feel strong emotions from it. It's was very pleasurable to read and I liked it alot ^_^ wonderful job there!

Thats really nice abel... and i wonder what its about... or it might have been random... not random but... you know what i mean...

Thanks Suzumi and Miyuki! Any critiques anyone has, please post them, I'd like to improve this if possible.

Wow Able! That was great! ^ ^ Good job!
..... :dumb: Wait...we can put poems in the Original box!!!!!!? :ahhh: Why didn't anyone tell me??!!! :tears: So many wasted papers!!!!!!!!! TT . TT I blame the cookie monster... (YEAH THAT'S RIGHT! I'M TALING ABOUT YOU KAITO!!!!!!!!!!!! )